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as countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment.

#countries #people #cars #trend #individuals #environment
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Many
people
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 argue that it will have a lot of disadvantages for the
environment
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 if more and more
people
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 buy and purpose their own
cars
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. Personally, I completely agree that the benefits of buying and using their own
cars
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 outweigh its drawbacks. On the one hand, there are two reasons why an increasing number of
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 buying and using their own means damaging the
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.
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 of all, the
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 will deteriorate if
people
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 use
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 too much. Simply because a vast number of
cars
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 are driven on the street
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 existing toxic gases like carbon dioxide.
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 reason leads to poor air quality and it
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 can contribute to global warming. For
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, in Ho Chi Minh city, citizens have to deal with air pollution by wearing masks to protect their health and avoid dusk.
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 a whole host of
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cars
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 can lead to water and
oil polluted
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.
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 some air pollutants and particulate matters from the car might be deposit on the soil and water surface where yield food sources that can affect not only our reproductive, respiratory, so on but
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 the neurological systems of animals.
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, I believe that the benefits are more significant than
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 disadvantages.
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, it provides
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freedom of movement and convenience. The reason is we can go everywhere without waiting or depending on other
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's schedules.
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, when we move by bus, it does not have the flexible time to choose, if we use our own car, we can stop everywhere during the journey.
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, time and distance are not barriers anymore.
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, it provides safety more than other means. Since it avoids interacting with
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 or crowds. so we can move safely and not become
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victim of criminal activities
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 as pickpocketing, thief,... To sum up, it seems to me that the advantages for individuals of a wide range of
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 have and use their own
cars
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 are more significant than the disadvantages for the
environment
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,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personal mobility
  • convenience
  • commuting
  • quality of life
  • personalized space
  • carbon emissions
  • global warming
  • air pollution
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental degradation
  • resource depletion
  • electric vehicles
  • carpooling
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