Some people say that students who achieve the highest scores in their exams should be rewarded. Others say that those who show progress should be rewarded instead. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

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is an important phase in every

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’ life where some perform well and others underperform.

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has raised a discussion between two parts of the society where one thinks that top scorers of the class should be rewarded whereas others believe that those who are trying hard to improve their score should

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deserve recognition. Securing the highest rank in the class is not everyone’s cup of tea and those who reach

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level should be commendable, as it requires a lot of hard work and dedication to achieve

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stage. Apart from

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, to become a top performer,

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have to compromise with their other areas of interest like playing sports, watching favourite TV shows, going out with friends which can sometimes cause depression or lead to frustration. So, to keep them away from negative thoughts and maintain their consistent performance, it is critical to recognize their

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by rewarding them in all possible ways.

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,

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who strive to secure good marks should

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be awarded.

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even though they know that they are not performing well still they put their best foot forward to achieve good marks.

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requires them to make an extra

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to understand their weakness like taking extra help

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tutors, sitting late

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to understand a single concept clearly.

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, it is very important to motivate these

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for all of their

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and keep encouraging them for the progress they have achieved. To conclude, every student who is studying very hard should be applauded for the

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irrespective of the exam results. While

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who perform well must be awarded,

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who try very hard to make progress definitely deserve

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credit too.