You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:describe the situation,explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work, say what kind of accommodation you would

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Dear Sir, My name is Smith, and I am a final year law student at
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college. I reside in North Avenue hostel, my room number is L10, and it is a shared apartment. I am writing
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letter to report the issues which I have been facing currently, and requesting you to confirm the procedure to change the room. I am currently staying with my roommate Paul who has been staying with me for the
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two months. He is very uncooperative, and because of his activities, I am unable to focus on my studies. Let me elaborate on the situation. He always plays the music very loudly,
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, he has a wide social circle and invites his friends almost every day, which makes the place overcrowded.
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makes it worse to focus on my studies, my exams are due
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month. For all these reasons, I would request you to highlight the procedure to change the apartment as it seriously hampering my studies. I would prefer to have a single room without any mates so that I can focus on my exams. I solicit your cooperation on
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matter.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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