Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit places?

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technology in travelling

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safer means nowadays travelling is no more

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cumbersome than a decade before that's why more and more travellers like to explore unknown

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new

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. Tourists love to explore new

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along with problems which they face are inevitable. I would like to discuss both of my viewpoints on

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desert or Antarctica is

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more difficult thing nowadays with advanced means which can lead to great exposure to beautiful scenery

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amazing fauna and flora of that

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in their economy and many travel agencies emerged which nowadays help in touring these remote

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of expeditions can bring problems with them

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can be unpredictable in terms of weather conditions, rough terrain and dangerous fauna of that particular

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. Tourists should always consult a guide before starting any tour at a new

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and proper surveying should be done before starting

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Antarctica due to rough weather conditions and they could barely survive with that food and amenities. So it can be tough for travellers to explore

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for recreational

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educational purposes is absolutely fine but without proper surveying and going without safer means can be difficult for tourists to enjoy the excursion.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction
Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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268 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

breathtaking landscapes
unique ecosystems
sense of adventure
personal growth
indigenous cultures
environmental conservation
climate change
environmental degradation
economically disadvantaged areas
physical health
harsh weather
difficult terrain
limited access to medical facilities
fragile ecosystems
habitat destruction
basic amenities

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit places?

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

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For some people learning in a group is the most effective way, while others prefer one-on-one instructions. Discuss both views. What is your opinion?

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