Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit places?
With the advent of
advance
technology in travelling Replace the word
advanced
n
safer means nowadays travelling is no more that
cumbersome than a decade before that's why more and more travellers like to explore unknown Correct your spelling
than
n
new places
. Tourists love to explore new places
along with problems which they face are inevitable. I would like to discuss both of my viewpoints on this
. Firstly
, exploring a new place
like Sahara
desert or Antarctica is Correct article usage
the Sahara
no
more difficult thing nowadays with advanced means which can lead to great exposure to beautiful scenery Add an article
a no
the no
n
amazing fauna and flora of that place
. For
example
many Add a comma
,example
tourist
nowadays travelled to Change to a plural noun
tourists
leh
Change the capitalization
Leh
ladajkh
area in topmost Kashmir which led to Correct your spelling
Ladakh
boost
in their economy and many travel agencies emerged which nowadays help in touring these remote Correct article usage
a boost
places
and experience life time
experience. Correct your spelling
lifetime
On the
contrary
Add a comma
,contrary
these kind
of expeditions can bring problems with them Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
also
. New places
can be unpredictable in terms of weather conditions, rough terrain and dangerous fauna of that particular place
. Tourists should always consult a guide before starting any tour at a new place
and proper surveying should be done before starting such
journey
. Correct article usage
a journey
For
instance
a group of travellers got stuck for at least one month Add a comma
,instance
at
Antarctica due to rough weather conditions and they could barely survive with that food and amenities. So it can be tough for travellers to explore Change preposition
in
such
areas. To summarize , exploring new places
for recreational n
educational purposes is absolutely fine but without proper surveying and going without safer means can be difficult for tourists to enjoy the excursion.Submitted by hargobind.rehal on
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