Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, the

extinction

plants

and

animals

is an environmental issue that has increased with time. But some

people

believe that environmental problems are not more important than other

world

issues.

This

essay will discuss these different opinions about environmental concerns. Taking into account my opinion over the alarms increased of species in

extinction

danger around the

world

Firstly

, the current

industries

required a huge quantity of natural resources to satisfied the big product demand from human society, many of these products are from

animals

and

plants

origin. Mainly, the

food

industry has a big impact on climate change due to the use of meat products and

plants

products. All these

industries

have to produce a huge amount of processed

food

to feed the whole

world

this

problem increased the hunting industry inside the sea

also

over the land.

As a result

, many

animals

have been extinct or on the border of

extinction

such

as the capibara in south America.

On the other hand

, some groups of

people

are not concerned about animal and

plants

extinction

. Because they do not feel affected by the lack of some species due to these persons live in big city areas, they are not worried about the dangers of some species and they just need is

food

and clothes without been notified of the source of the

food

or product. One good example is tourism, the

people

just want to enjoy every place that they visited, more often these

industries

create more pollution and garbage because they live to feed many

people

, and someplace use animal which the main attraction for tourists. In conclusion, companies are more worried about earning money and they are not concerned about the way to find

this

money,

also

some

people

live in comfortable houses that are separate from the real problem in other parts of the

world

. I firmly believe that

industries

must be more concerned about the impact of their process in the environmental sector and they have to eliminate the use of

animals

and

plants

extinction

danger to earn more money in their pockets.

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
extinction
habitat loss
ecosystem
food chain
imbalance
interconnected
climate change
pollution
personal actions
policy changes
education
awareness

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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