Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent, do you agree or disagree ?

Environmental issues have been confronted not only by environmentalists and politicians but
also
by
individuals
as well. Some opponents believe that role of
individuals
is very less in terms of protection. But I believe
individuals
also
play
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role in society and it's their
duty
to oblige by certain
rules
and regulations .
Firstly
,
rules
are made by
government
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and its
duty
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of the
individuals
to abide by them .
For
instance
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government banned plastic completely and now
its
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duty
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of people to carry jute bags to carry their belongings and as well shopkeepers should keep paper bags to
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their products. Parents should inculcate proper habits
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children from
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beginning. Schools can motivate students to participate in
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seminars n workshops.
On the contrary
, politicians are responsible for
proper
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implementation of
rules
and make sure officials under them do their work with honesty and diligently. They should keep regular checks on industries and impose
them
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heavy fines if they do not abide by the
rules
and regulations.
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many factories lost their license after officials discovered
about
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their waste dumpings into nearby
river
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polluting the flora and fauna of that river. To summarize I would say it's not only politician 's
duty
to look after our environment but it's a joint
duty
of every individual n person who is a part of
this
Society and using natural resources to use it sustainably and protect the environment by every means
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental protection
  • responsibility
  • politicians
  • individuals
  • large-scale
  • policies
  • regulations
  • impact
  • corporations
  • environmentally friendly practices
  • resources
  • expertise
  • collective efforts
  • difference
  • combination
  • crucial
  • effective
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