Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It appears that you are missing a preposition after a lot. Consider adding a preposition.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase On the other hand. Consider adding a comma.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction that. Consider removing the comma.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction that. Consider removing the comma.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma before the dependent clause marker because. Consider removing the comma.
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