Do you think it is better for students to work before their university studies? Why? Using reasons and specific examples to support your choice

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Nowadays, taking ‘a
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year
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’ is the popular choice for undergraduates who recently graduated from high
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. A
gap
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year
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is a
time
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between graduation from high
school
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and starting at the academy; pupil can make their own decision about what they want to do in their
future
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; as well as gain some experience doing something away from
study
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. Working is
one
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of the popular options for
students
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because they can have
time
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to think more about themselves by trying various places, not only the subjects at
college
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,
also
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have more understanding of the value of
money
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and learn how to manage their own finances.
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the practical experiences that they learn from their workplaces can not come from any theoretical backgrounds. My essay will focus on reasons with detailed explanations about why
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should work before starting
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.
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of all, working before their
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studies can help
students
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to have the right direction by trying various
jobs
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. Actually, the knowledge that we learn at
college
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is quite huge and it is certainly different from the
university
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programs;
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the reason why most
students
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feel shocked and are not able to manage their
time
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in their
first
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year
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of
study
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.
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, many
students
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decide to change their majors because they have no motivation to come to class. ,
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because they don’t have enough
time
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to think about what they are really interested in for the
future
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instead
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of trying to get some good marks at
college
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.
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, working is an advantage because
students
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have so many opportunities to try various
jobs
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such
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as becoming baristas, babysitters, nail technicians, etcetera. They have
time
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to understand more about the job and if they feel the
jobs
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are not suited for them, they can try the new
one
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; everything can be available because they are young and they have space to learn. Until finding the
jobs
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they are really interested in, they absolutely will have the motivation to get the certifications of their chosen degrees because they can see themselves after 5 years or more.
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, the risk of
students
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who take a
gap
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year
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changing their majors or dropping out of their
first
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year
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of
university
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is significantly less than the risk of
students
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who do not take a
gap
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year
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.
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, working before their
university
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studies
also
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can help
students
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understand the value of
money
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and learn how to manage their own finances.
This
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is important because at
this
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time
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young people have to be independent of their families. The
money
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that they earn from full-
time
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or part-
time
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jobs
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can be charged for their higher education;
students
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can choose to
study
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abroad, which can be quite expensive but at least they can feel more comfortable spending
money
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because
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the
money
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that they earn by themselves, not from their parents or governments. After trying hard to earn their budgets,
students
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can learn how to manage their salary
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as renting houses, preparing meals, vehicle maintenance, etcetera; particularly for
students
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who live far away from their families.
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, most international
students
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in
university
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can be good at managing their own
money
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because they know the importance of
money
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that they earn; they
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have to face lots of issues when living far from their own families. It incidentally makes them become mature, independent and easily successful in their lives.
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, practical experiences from workplaces can not be taught at
school
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. At the workplace,
students
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can be taught by workers, who have plenty of experience from their area of expertise.
Students
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have to become active and work in teams; they can understand more responsibilities of the
jobs
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and their roles in the teams.
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their life skills can be improved rapidly in authentic learning conditions. It is much different from
school
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,
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can only learn by theory from the books and lack practical experience; lessons that they learn can be forgotten after having exams.
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, most people say learning by ‘muscle memory’ can
last
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longer than learning from books because they completely understand what they are doing and the purpose of doing it;
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, their brains become more active and the memories can
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longer. Undoubtedly, taking a
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year
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can make us postpone
study
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for
one
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year
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compared to our
college
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friends;
however
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, working during a
gap
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period brings us a lot of benefits
such
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as making the right direction in our lives and learning lots of life skills. The
time
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that we spend for the
gap
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year
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is a chance for young people, it is
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a big motivation for us to follow our dreams. It is ‘never too late to learn and we should only start to
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at
university
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when we are ready. I believe no
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in the
future
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cares about how quickly we can pass
university
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, so please give yourself a chance to think about what you are really interested in and have no regrets for the
future
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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