The lifespan of
people
day by day due to technology and medical services. Nowadays ,
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of older
people
increasing in many nations. I would argue that
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this
issue can bring some problems.
The problem associated with
this
problem is health care costs will increase, after that
government
imposing the taxes on working
people
so ,it will
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to burden of employers and
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owing to lack of money
government
put
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essential needs
such
as education and transportation .
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, in many
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like
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60 years of retirement age and after that
government
pay them from
people
tax.
Moreover
,
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is very crucial for
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of nations.
In addition
, in
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private
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like TATA and Reliance
ageing
people
delay their retirement age which is beneficial for
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.
On the other hand
,
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citizens are
also
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society.
People
today try to live
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and
also
focus on healthy eating and sports .
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, in political
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can teach young
people
how to manage a fund of nations and how to provide better services for
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. Many political
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like Pranav
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finance minister of
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still , working in
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without taking single rupees from
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ageing
people
is
also
necessary for
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functioning of the system .
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, life expectancy
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strong owing to technology and advanced health care services ,
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will influence on economic development of a country .
Although
, we can make good use of
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workforce.