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Some parents believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe it should remain a foundational subject whether or not it is used later in life. Discuss both sides.

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It is often argued that learning
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 others widely believe that
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 the curriculum level without thinking that it is used or not in future. In my
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 limit to not taught unnecessary statistics.
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 in any financial related calculations.
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 does not only have simple maths but theory and algorithms that
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 invented by scientist or mathematicians, so today’s generation should aware about what was invented and they can improve their skills using maths. Many other subjects
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 lack of interest in
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 just has calculations, formulas and algorithm. Students who
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 not have interest in
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 and most of them fail in
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 and feel uncomfortable, depressed because of
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it. The growing body of research
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