The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what are the possible solutions?

The
internet
has changed the way of sharing and consuming information but it
also
leads the issues like cybercrime, fake news and isolation among
people
.
This
essay will discuss its problems and solutions to tackle
this
problem in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, nowadays,
people
are facing crime over the
internet
. Some hackers hack bank details and
then
transfer money in own account.
For instance
, In India, two years ago a criminal hack the account of a businessman and transfer all money to his own account. It is
also
found all over the world that online crime is increased by 60%.
Moreover
,
people
also
spread false news over the
internet
. The consequences of false news are really bad.
People
who prefer the
internet
for everything have become isolated. They do not like to interact with
people
.
As a result
, they get depressed.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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