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Nowadays many poeple choose p be selfe-employed,rather than to work for a company or orgnasation. why might this be the case? what would be disadvantages of being self-employed?

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These days, being self-employed is getting
so
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 popular among individuals. People like to
work
 for themselves as being their own boss gives you a fulfilling feeling.
Although
 working
for
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 your own provides
variety
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 of advantages, there are some drawbacks like more responsibility and stress because of more
work load
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 which should be considered. One of the reasons that people select to be their own boss is that they can make and organize their daily
plan
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 with more freedom.
This
 is because they do not have deadlines to finish their task and answer their
supervisor
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 question about it.
For instance
,
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one recent paper mentioned that women who
work
 independently
instead
 of in a company feel more calm,
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, and
glad
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. They admitted by working in
this
 way they are able to spend much quality time with their family and friends. Despite advantages, self-employment faces some challenges as well which should be taken into account .
it is clear that
 by employment in a company or firm, individuals benefit from some advantages.
For instance
, company or government pay as a vacation or sick days pay which is not possible to have as a self-employed.
morever
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moreover
more
 taxes
is
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 another essential thing in
work
 which
is need
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 knowledge and time
managment
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management
. By self-employment, you need to keep track of your taxes. Even it is essential to make a budget for it throughout the year. Those who choose to
work
 for themselves should pay attention more to their savings.
This
 is because their salary is not consistent every month.
To sum up
,
although
 being
of
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your own boss is a very
powerfull
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powerful
 feeling, there are so many disadvantages
about
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 it compared to employment that should be taken
in
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 consideration.
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general
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conclusion
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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