in some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people researgch this?

Having a
house
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important
however
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, knowing the
history
about
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that building is more important. Nowadays , in many
countries
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an increasing amount of folks would like to know about the
history
of the
house
that they tend to buy.
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essay will discuss the possible reasons and where they can find that information. In my perspective, possessing data about the
house
where you will live is crucial for our future and to be in peace . Is it so important to know about the
history
of the
house
? Yes, indeed! These days there are a big amount of buildings ,that have been built in different years and from various
material
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.
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, is vital to know
those information
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, because
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is
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depends on persons’ preference and their
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lifestyle
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life style
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.
For example
, many people have
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an allergy
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allergy
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to concrete and if the
house
consists
that
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type of material it might lead to a serious health problem .
As a result
, is essential to know how that
house
has built, in what conditions and
last
but not least its landlords. On another hand, to find about a
house
’s
history
is not easy. There are not so many places where you can find that . One example could be, the previous proprietor ,who should know about
building’s
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statistics.
Moreover
,
local
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the local
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authority
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must provide information and should possess data about all buildings in their area .
Nevertheless
, you could search on your own from your place on
internet
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the internet
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, where you have access to
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numerous sites about local houses. To draw the conclusion, in my
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we should invest our time to find more knowledge about our dream
house
because
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that
depends
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our salubrious future.
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