In the future, it may be necessary for us to live on another planet. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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a human we can evolve and have
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future. For the dream to reach Mars is already in progress , The collaboration of Nasa and Space-x is already doing so much research to gather data on mars and many
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scientists
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time to check the data and researching how we can make the human live
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planet
. The Space-x already announced that by 2024 they are planning
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sending humans to
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mars. For saving
earth
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,
this
is
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important thing to do. After all mother
earth
is giving us the space to live and food and we should always be grateful to it and we should always invest our
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capabilities
to tackle the issues that we face
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environmentally
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and Canada observed the highest peak of heat
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the record of over 84 years, many scientist and
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environmental
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psychologist
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believed
believe
that
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is due to human population and in that biggest factor which might have been causing
this
is
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industrial
waste and air pollution,
this
is very high time now that we can think of our home and government should
also
encourage or introduce laws which will be in favour of preserving
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I think to some
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progress for both of the topics. Almost all the governments are focusing on
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green energy and looking for
the
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techniques that will help to reduce the
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pollution
by
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spreading
awareness to save our mother
earth
. On
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there are some great personalities who are doing the best work to evolve
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human and
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searching
for living on
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. If we see most of our generation
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causious
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cautious
above preserving our
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environment
by doing lots of social activities and
also
doing the meetup via social media and
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volunteering
in NGOs, while on
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side the same
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generation
is excited about the new
planet
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Mars and always curious to know what are the
possibilitites
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possibilities
to reach there. If we see the examples we see there are many
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are going on for saving the
planet
. There are many activities like
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trees , reduce plastic bag usage ,
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usage
of
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environmental
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friendly
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; we are on our way to
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the
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elecric
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electric
vehicle which will reduce the air pollution caused by the
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current
usage of motor vehicles. The
governmets
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governments
government
are investing in green
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energy
highly
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such
as solar energy and many more
things
. If we think practically both the
things
are utmost
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necessary
in
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scenario, Humans are the top most intelligent
specis
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species
on
this
planet
than any other species that have been discovered. We should use
this
intelligence to evolve and continue evolving so that we can have always
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for every universal challenge that might come on us; But if we observe from the past we can see that we are
slighly
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slightly
slowed down our progress for evolving as species, we no longer know how pyramids of
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have been made and so many mysterious
things
that might have
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happened
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years ago and scientists are still
scrating
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scratching
scripting
their heads to resolve how it was made. So
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should always use
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their
brain to service
to
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the
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humanity and
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fulfil
the service of human life. So going to Mars is our future and we should always chase and saving
earth
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is our present we should always
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is and we all know
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has the priority that
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in any case.
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