Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There are so many things in the
world
that can attach Use synonyms
people
to each other which is not dependent on your culture or ages Use synonyms
such
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music
. It doesn't require any language and we have it every part of our lives due to ease of access. Use synonyms
Therefore
, I definitely agree that it is the best tool for bringing Linking Words
people
together.
It is a fact that several things are generating borders between peoples and countries except for Use synonyms
music
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Therefore
, learning a new language or travelling all over the Linking Words
world
are not necessary for reaching Use synonyms
music
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instead
, it is in every part of our lives even as a small melody and sharing the same musical taste and accompanying the same rhyme at the same time with somebody on the other side of the Linking Words
world
is possible. Use synonyms
For instance
, as technology advanced, a vast of Linking Words
people
using the same applications for listening to Use synonyms
music
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such
as Spotify which is made it possible for everyone to follow global hits.
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Moreover
, some places have age limits or for using some chemicals, there are other restrictions but Linking Words
music
can't be restricted. On contrary, even while you're walking on the road you may hear hits from cafes and bars. Even though all the differences and cultural or economic backgrounds, we may be aware of the same recordings or Use synonyms
music
bands with different Use synonyms
people
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For example
, one of the K-pop band, BTS is a huge hit which has fans from all over the Linking Words
world
.
To conclude, I extremely agree on the Use synonyms
music
's power as a connector among Use synonyms
people
from every culture or age. It is an inevitable part of our lives with no language or any restrictions, which is why we may share common musical tastes or we may be fans of the same musical bands with irrelevant Use synonyms
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from the other side of the Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite