Some people think building more roads can reduce the traffic. What do you think of this solution?

It goes without saying that building roads and infrastructure is a great sign of the development of the country. ,
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nowadays the
traffic
problem is very common in cities and the
government
to try to build new roads to reduce
traffic
jams. A few of activist is not in favour of
this
solution. They believe that building road is only a wastage of time and money
besides
this
we have to guide the public about
traffic
rules and management. For the general ,public
government
transportation should be economical and easily accessible. So, that public use more
government
vehicles more often. It
also
helps us in reducing air pollution and sound pollution
also
. While others believe that by developing roads the
traffic
problem get solved easily and the opportunity for travelling, import and export are
also
opened from other states which means more employment is generated for local people. By developing road other companies
also
invest in cities for their business which we guess a great advantage for
government
also
. In , the conclusion we can say that
government
should take a decision in the favour of local development
also
but keep in mind that by building the road we shouldn't cut off the trees and there is no harm and negative impact on nature by development
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