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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The medical field and healthcare services are advancing at a fast pace through the incorporation of science and technology in every aspect of disease diagnosis and prevention.
This
 has
further
 advanced the human lifestyle and lifespan.
Hence
, I agree that the present time is the best for living. The quality of
life
 has been improved to a high extend or in other ,words the ease of living is significantly enhanced with the support of the latest scientific and technological research outcomes.
For instance
, people are free to travel to their favourite vacation spot by various means of transport that provide luxurious services.
Moreover
, any information can be accessed just by finger touch and anything people wish is available at their doorsteps. The present era can be described as a time of comforts and luxuries. Advancements have taken place in various sectors, namely, education, business, and communication. Students enjoy being taught through online platforms without travelling to educational institutions and mothers of school-going children are now not compelled to wake up early in the morning to perform kitchen chores. Lending loans, purchase of groceries, recreational activity coaching, and many other activities can be conducted through online platforms and even a step-out from home is not essential. In fact, it is the best stage to enjoy the wonderful services offered by technology. Everyone should lead their
life
 joyfully enjoying each and every aspect of technical inventions and discoveries. Since the present
life
 provides all the essential facilities for our being, the best is to enjoy every moment of
life
, just living the
life
 ahead.
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