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Some people say that the more a product is advertised, the more people will buy it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #product
In the modern days,
products
 and
advertisements
 often go together. It is considered by many that the increase in a
number
 of advertisement for
products
 enable them to be attained by most
people
. I think, the demand for
products
 comes down to a
number
 of
advertisements
 but not at all for some situations. On the one hand, the product becomes much more noticeable with
advertisements
. Companies seek to grow their numbers. A substantial
number
 of
people
 encounter them anywhere
such
 as on the billboards, on the internet or in a break of TV series; which increases the likelihood of being purchased because of drawing their attention.
Therefore
,
this
 results in a rise in the company’s sales.
For example
,
people
 always exposed to lots of
advertisements
 about chocolate companies tend to buy their
products
, going to the supermarket.
On the other hand
, companies generally opt to cooperate with talented advertisers that can generate creative works due to the fact that not only quantity of
advertisements
 is important but
also
 the quality of them is crucial for the sale rates. Effective
advertisements
 have remarkably positive impacts on the consumer because
people
 keep
products
 in mind easily, whether being less or not; leading to more consumption of them.
For example
, a cringe or peculiar advertisement can become more popular among
people
 and it can be risen up at purchasing of
products
. In conclusion, the
number
 of
advertisements
 could be enough for the sales rate of
products
. Effective ones,
however
, sometimes can achieve their goals without paying lots of advertisement costs.
Submitted by mdorukugur on

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