Some people say that playing sports helps to prepare children for their future work, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether children could learn essential

fuctions

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functions

for their future career

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through

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activities or not. In

this

essay, I am going to examine

this

question from both points of view and

then

explain why I believe that some

sports

could help youngsters to succeed in their life. There are people who argued that the benefits of

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sports

considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing

this

is that those children who commence

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sports

in their early years learn the importance of being competitive to overcome their results. It is

also

possible to say that many of them learn how to administrate their mind

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through

sports

, mainly when they are

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. One good illustration of

this

is from tennis, where concentration is essential for players

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their better skills and supporters need to keep in silence too due to it.

On the other hand

, others believe that the role of

sports

is not so important in business. It is often argued that children should

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their time in a different way. People have

this

opinion because

instead

of

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their hours playing soccer or basketball, they could

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in a course to learn some language

such

as

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. A

second

point is that when youngsters are playing

sports

, in general, they are having fun with their colleagues, while in

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area there is a stressful atmosphere against you. A particularly good example here is the health’s workers who

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all day long treating humans’ diseases and having a lot of

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pressure

on their hands. In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance,

however

, I feel that

sports

could help a

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juveniles to improve some important attributes for their career.

This

is because

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through

sports

you can learn how to be in control of your mind and learn how to work as a team.