An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country

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Dear Merry, I am writing

this

letter to advise you on the best time to vacation in my country. Well, I was overwhelmed, when I received your letter yesterday that you are planning to

visit

India

and I asked for some recommendations. As

fas

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far

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as the best time to

visit

India

is concerned.

However

, you can

visit

India

like October and November because

that

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time the weather is moderate temperature.

Beside

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this

, in

this

month’s, we can fully enjoy every

moments

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Secondly

, If I talk about accommodation, you can stay with me as well as there are

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plenty of facilities where you can feel comfortable stay.

In addition

this

India

is a diverse country, there are a lot of places, where we can

visit

such

as Golden Temple, Taj Mahal, The Red Resort, colourful city of Chandigarh and Jaipur, where you can enjoy the traditional as well as cultural food. Looking forward to seeing you here in

India

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Yours

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Your

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Yours

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faithfully,

Tamur

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Tamura

Tamara

Submitted by kaushalmaheep on Thu Jul 15 2021

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

165 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country

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