An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country

Dear Merry, I am writing
this
letter to advise you on the best time to vacation in my country. Well, I was overwhelmed, when I received your letter yesterday that you are planning to
visit
India
and I asked for some recommendations. As
fas
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as the best time to
visit
in
India
is concerned.
However
, you can
visit
in
India
like October and November because
that
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time the weather is moderate temperature.
Beside
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this
, in
this
month’s, we can fully enjoy every
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.
Secondly
, If I talk about accommodation, you can stay with me as well as there are
a
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plenty of facilities where you can feel comfortable stay.
In addition
to
this
,
India
is a diverse country, there are a lot of places, where we can
visit
such
as Golden Temple, Taj Mahal, The Red Resort, colourful city of Chandigarh and Jaipur, where you can enjoy the traditional as well as cultural food. Looking forward to seeing you here in
India
.
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faithfully,
Tamur
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Tamura
Tamara
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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