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Some parents buy their kids a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages of a child having a large number of toys?

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Many people buy lots of
toys
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 for their
kids
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. While
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 can be beneficial in stimulating the child’s development, an oversupply of
toys
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 can just as much cause children to lose concentration and
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 they start taking the many
toys
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 for granted. On the one hand, buying many different
toys
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 for children may be a great way to encourage a child’s cognitive and fine motor development. Especially educational
toys
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 are a fantastic way to teach a child basic skills
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 as recognising the alphabet and numbers, or training hand-eye coordination and fine motor skills.
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, a child who has a variety of
toys
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 that teach familiarity with numbers may find it easier to understand basic numeracy at primary school. The downside of an oversupply of
toys
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 is that
kids
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 can quickly become overstimulated and lose interest and even become frustrated. If there are too many items to choose from, young children find it hard to pick something and stick to it for a while. Their self-initiated play may
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 become compromised as they learn to expect items to entertain them and don’t get much practice using their imagination.
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, after a birthday party with lots of gifts, my daughter usually only plays with the new items for a day or two before getting bored with them. She has a few
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 that she loves dearly and will play with time and again. On balance, it can be said that while
kids
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 who are surrounded by lots of
toys
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, might find
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 beneficial in many learning aspects, the arguments against having too many
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 outweigh the position. Too many
toys
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 will leave the
kids
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 distracted and unable to concentrate and might
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 have longer-term consequences for their learning.
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