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Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Nowadays, we see a dramatic change in
food
 consumption habits across the world. The canned
food
 has become common and more popular among people in very little
time
, resulting in, fading of the conventional form of
food
preparation
. I agree with
this
 statement for some reason and my position will be
further
 explained in
this
 essay. Out of all
reason
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, the foremost one is that decrease in the members of
family
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the family
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, resulting in, the head of the family working hard to
fulfill
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 the needs of the people. There are predominantly two significant reasons responsible for the flourishing of
this
 trend in the coming years.
Firstly
, family size has reduced to nuclear or single parents family, which means adult members are busy in addressing the family challenges,
that is
 earning enough money to fulfil the needs of the family.
As a result
, spending
time
 on old methodology to prepare
food
, which is extravagantly
time
-consuming is considered
as
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futile and less significant.
Conversely
, in earlier days, when family size was large, a single family member was dedicated to looking after the growing and
preparation
 of
time
-consuming
food
. In those days, it was economical in terms of
time
 to do so.
Secondly
, these days, we find an increasing number of working mothers.
As a result
, they face an arduous challenge to balance their work and family life, and they prefer the fastest way to prepare
the
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food
 and feed their family.
Consequently
, the processed
food
 becomes their spontaneous choice, as it takes no
time
 to prepare.
Also
, it is evident from the Times survey that 60% of working women choose the easiest and less
time
-consuming way to prepare
food
 due to their busy
schedule
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. Admittedly, ready to prepare
food
 poses a serious threat to the existence of traditional
food
 as our children are highly likely to imitate what they see, which means that conventional
food
 will become obsolete. In conclusion, our
food
 habit is highly influenced by the lifestyle we follow. From the above argument, I infer that the absence of dedicated
member
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 to prepare the
time
 consumed conventional
food
 and ease in
preparation
 of the processed
food
 becomes the predominant factors to choose
the
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convenience
food
. If
this
 trend continues
then
 soon conventional
food
 and its
preparation
 ways will be forgotten.
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