In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Nowadays youngsters prefer to
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their graduation from foreign countries
instead
of studying in their own and
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trend is surging fastly. There are merits and demerits of
this
brain drain which I will discuss in
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paragraphs. To embark on, students tend to incline toward developed nations where
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of opportunities exist and standard of life is better as compared to developing countries.
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, the quality of education overseas is surpassing
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others.
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, a person
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from
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Oxford university tends to get a job
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is financially satisfying along with making an individual updated about all changes going on.
On the other hand
, getting a degree from
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nation can be very expensive. The fees are in dollars and in pounds which are manifolds than developing
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.
In addition
to it, going to a new place and starting
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life from a scratch can be cumbersome for many masses .
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, many students face financial crunches during their course completion and they have to burn
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oil for meeting their ends meet and they do jobs along with their
study
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. After having a myopic look, it can be educed that
this
movement has its own merits and demerits which need to ponder upon.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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