Art is considered an important part of society as well as expression of culture. do you think it is important for children to be taught art? do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?
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society as well as helps in Remove the article
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expression
of its heritage . It should be mandatory to make Correct article usage
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young
generation learn about it and I think it should be taught to the children along with the other subjects.
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art
is expressed in many forms such
as paintings, handicrafts, pottery, drawings , sculptures ,classical dance and so on. Any country' s
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art
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For example
, a special form of mouth puppetry form exist in southernmost parts of India and it is losing its importance due to youngsters being not exposed to that art
and moreover
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due to folks not letting their offsprings exposure to these things.
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On the contrary
, it is very crucial to make young people learn about roots
of our rich heritage and let them take part in all skills along with other subjects too. Correct article usage
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For example
, many teenagers who go for arts in their graduation subject can certainly become a famous fashion designer in future . So equal weight age
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