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Some believe that it is good for a country’s culture to import films and TV programmes, while others think it is better for a country to have their own films and TV programmes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Watching different films and TV
programmes
 becomes our most common daily activity. There are mostly two types of
programmes
, imported and local
programmes
.
Programmes
 imported from other countries bring us various information while local
programmes
 are more down to earth. No matter how the quality and quantity of these programs , both of them occupy an important position in our leisure time no matter weekdays or weekends. On one hand, the imported program contributes to the variety of local programs.
For example
, we can enjoy movies provided by NETFLIX and Apple . These two companies regularly produce different kinds of programs, ranging from scary moves, tragic movies to variety shows, even educational
programmes
.
Thus
, the country’s culture will be easily benefited from these types of foreign
programmes
 since it brings along new ideas and new thoughts.
On the other hand
, it is vital to keep the local
programmes
 production. Having their own programme is somehow an act of conversation. Local people know very much about things that happen in their life
such
 as artists, movie stars and local news.
As a result
, It is hard to ignore them as it is a kind of collective memory of popularity. In conclusion. It is obviously that imported films cause an impact on a country’s culture
hence
 leading to numerous films production.
However
, keeping the local
programmes
also
 create the collective memory of citizens. In my opinion, I will strike a balance between watching foreign and local
programmes
.
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