‘Prisons are an expensive way of making bad people worse’ To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Penitentiary

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people

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prison become

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worse than ever before. It is often argued issue whether

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incarceration is stimulated criminals will become

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too bad or not.

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, I strongly agree with

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statement for the following reasons.

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with, there are many reasons to happens in

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statement because nowadays prisoners face so many psychological

problem

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such

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as stress and depression.

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, some

offender

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might do a plan

in

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inside the jail due to they are sitting idle that's why they are thinking illegally again

ang

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and

again.

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,

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place is the best place

of

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plan

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illegal activity

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,

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trend certainly, will reduce.

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,

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is a high-priced way of making offenders will become

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worse because

of

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all criminals are

jointed

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joined

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in one place

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, they can share their bad experience

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,

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will provoke

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them to

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do any other illegal activity.

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, penitentiary cannot change

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the

criminals

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criminal's

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mind even

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can stimulate to do a big misconduct activity. To be more precise,

an

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incarceration needs a massive building and well_trained officers

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,

a tons

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of capital

spends

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to maintain these.

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, automatically the captives ratio will increase as well as the misconduct ratio

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expand

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without a reason. To conclude, certainly,

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trend will become a worse people who the prisoners. Many jails spend a lot of money on safety and food and all other amenities even they did a big mistake. I hope

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trend is inconducive for

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healthy society.