An American writer think that tomorrow is more important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been suggested by one author that
tomorrow
, or the future, is more important in our life. While I do believe in the saying that "tomorrow
will be better", I think it can only be achieved by living today
diligently.
On the one hand, we all need hope for tomorrow
. Like the famous line in the movie Gone with the Wind, "tomorrow
is another day" suggested, we cannot be immersed in the sore and regrets that we have for now. None does it helps to feel remorse and complain, but only make people even more miserable. Instead
, we need to hope for the best and pull ourselves together for what is waiting ahead. This
is why that it can be argued that tomorrow
plays a more significant role.
On the other hand
, the only way to be able to live a better tomorrow
is through the hard work of today
. People who live for the moment understand the necessity of being practical as the key to life. Tomorrow
will always be tomorrow
, or an illusion, if we do not strive and try to make every effort we can towards it. Moreover
, for people whose days are numbered, every moment counts. If we only focused on what may happen tomorrow
, we are more likely to miss what is happening today
which is exactly what builds up a tomorrow
.
In conclusion, it seems to me that every second
we are spending is precious and the actual today
should be appreciated more than the invisible tomorrow
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite