Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The answer is complex since there are a lot of
choices
in our life
and all of them are different kinds.In some Replace the word
lives
cases
I would say that it is avoid thing to have the ability to choose from a wide variety.Take Add a comma
,cases
for
example,gastronomy.Every single person has different meals on their list of favourites.Add the comma(s)
,for
Actually
if you have a bigger family it is almost impossible to cook something that everyone would like.Add a comma
,Actually
Therefore
i
would say that it is great that you can go to a shopping centre and choose from a Change the capitalization
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different food types.I can always find something that looks delicious. Naturally,there are some people who say that it is against evolution.They claim to say that back in the old days we had a perfect life when technically everybody was farming.I personally disagree with that.I am happy that I could choose a job that fits best to my abilities.I mean no one is the same,why would be want to do the same?Different kinds of universities give us the opportunity to Correct your spelling
dozen
became
Change the verb
become
who
we are meant to be.We have the right to choose. Change the pronoun
whom
However
there is one topic where,according to my opinion,we have too many Add a comma
,However
choices
.This
specific area in
television.Correct your spelling
is
Thrre
Correct your spelling
There
Three
are
hundreds of channels,Change the verb form
is
therefore
you can always find songs that
is
worth watching.Change the verb form
are
Literally
you could sit Add a comma
,Literally
in
your sofa the whole day and watch films.I think that people doing Change preposition
on
less
outdoor activities are the result of many available channels.From Correct quantifier usage
fewer
this
point of view
I would agree that we have too many Add a comma
,view
choices
. In conclusion
I would say that we cannot generally talk about Add a comma
,conclusion
choices
since they could be different.In some cases
it is Add a comma
,cases
a
good to have many of Change the article
apply
them
wild other areas they could have a negative effect.Correct your spelling
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite