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Men and women are capable of doing all jobs equally well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#men #women #jobs
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It is argued convincingly that any
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 could be completed properly by either
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 or woman without any difference in terms of gender. I absolutely support it, and for the purpose of
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 opinion. The
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 and foremost statement that the opposite side could provide says that women cannot lift heavy items. For most cases,
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 true;
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, when it comes to the business, almost all jobs where it is necessary to deal with heavy objects have been automated or mechanized.
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, dockworkers nowadays should use an electric pallet jack and forklift. That means the driver's license is needed more than the ability to elevate something by yourself.
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, anybody, even a teenager or old
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 with some skills, could
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 in marine docks and do
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 that could do
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 only a century ago.
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, from the mental perspective, there are no particular proofs that women cannot do
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 connected with high mental activities,
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 as scientific research or complex math equations.
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, NASA, the US space agency, could not launch his
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 to space without a woman, Katherine Johnson, who was able to make manual calculations without using any computers. Even more, she literally worked as a computer.
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, women play a significant role in science and space exploration. In conclusion, I would like to highlight that I have attempted to review concisely
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 my agreement with the main subject in
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 essay. There is no evidence that could lead to any distinctions between
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 jobs and woman ones.
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  • personal skills
  • qualifications
  • success stories
  • stereotypes
  • perceptions
  • education and training
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  • gender-diverse workplaces
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