In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction Although. Consider removing the comma.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that purpose may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...