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Wealth does not necessarily guarantee happiness. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?

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An increasing number of people prefer to live out of them as it is calmer, safer and cleaner.
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, others prefer the city
instead
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, since everything is within reach and the fact that a is full of life and can have whatever a
customer
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 needs. On the one hand, being out of the brings with it the peace and safety that many admire.
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: a
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 residing in the
countryside
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 will be more in touch with nature and away from the city noise and traffic.
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, the
countryside
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 brings with it cleaner air and water when compared to the. Saying that being in a rural area means you are away from many of the facilities and services that can be found only in a.
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, a rural
customer
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 might need to travel to the town centre to buy food and home stuff or to get their mail.
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, living in the allows the
customer
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 to be more in touch with international events, and have easier access to more business. As living in a populated area, you will have more duty in an arm-reach,
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 as having access to fast internet, more places to visit, and more shopping options.
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, most of the important government duties are usually located in a.
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 being in one, means you can have quick and easy access to many things that you cannot find in the
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.
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, more and more people are moving to the, bringing with them more traffic, noise and pollution.
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, you have to live with thousands or even millions in a smaller space. In conclusion, living in a rural area rather than the is an interesting subject for debate. As residing in the
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 brings with it peace of mind, better air and water quality, and less traffic - it takes away the many use and support systems available in the.
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