Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health. You should write at least 150 words.

This
chart gives some data about teeth decay causations. There are 3 reasons:
fruit
sugar
, cane
sugar
,
honey
. We are able to see that there is refusing dramatically from 7
pH
levels to 3.5 in cane
sugar
in 5
minutes
.
This
process is hazardous for teeth.
In addition
,start to rise gradually and a high rate was introduced in
7
Correct article usage
the 7
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ph
level
. On the one hand, in
fruit
sugar
showing reduced from almost 6.7
pH
to approximately 4.3
pH
level
in 5
minutes
.What is more,
on
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in
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the following
minutes
started to increase sharply.
Fruit
, cane,
honey
sugar
are the top statistic
level
off 7
pH
level
.
Finally
, the
last
is about
honey
.
Honey
and
fruit
sugar
equal each other in before,
however
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,however
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honey
decreased to 4.8
ph
Change to a plural noun
pHs
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in 5
minutes
. Unlike others, between 5 and 10
minutes
is equal
one
Change preposition
to one
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another.From 10
minutes
to 25
minutes
increased.Between 25 and 35
minutes
is similar.
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