International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Travelling internationally has numerous benefits not only to the visiting tourists but

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for the destination as well.

Although

, it should be considered that

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still has certain drawbacks. In

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detail the negative impacts before stating my opinion. It is

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a known fact that international visitors increase

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tourism in any region. A good example of

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is Philippine residents travelling to other parts of Asia – Japan, specifically. If they travel to

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country, they will get to see scenic places and learn about the culture and try out the different delicacies of the Japanese.

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rate for the locals will increase due to the demand

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service sectors like hotels, restaurants, and tourist destinations.

Thus

, it can be clearly concluded that both parties will benefit from it.

However

, there is a downside that the expenditures would not be met

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since touring overseas is considered a privilege. There are more priorities, especially for developing countries, that should be taken into consideration rather than travelling.

For instance

, some Filipinos would rather spend their money in purchasing luxurious food locally for the whole family than bringing them to other places.

In addition

, some believe that, for a more inexpensive experience, it is better to discover the hidden gems domestically. In conclusion, travelling internationally is beneficial.

Moreover

, it still has downsides because of unsustainable finances. I personally believe that there a more advantages that overcome the small disadvantages, since

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all, people should not be constrained in their own homes but rather discover various beliefs and cultures worldwide.