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Some people do not do exercise even though that it has good health benefits -Why don’t they exercise? - How can this problem be solved?

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Exercising is a growing trend amongst
people
 nowadays,
this
 is because of how beneficial it is to our health.
However
, some
peolpe
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people
 do not participate in
this
 trend because they feel it
it
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is
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time
 and
energy consuming
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energy-consuming
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.
This
 essay highlights
this
 problem and how registering in a gym and keeping
strict
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a strict
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 schedule can be a solution. There is a
believe
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belief
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 that going to the gym takes
alot
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a lot
 of effort and
time
. Usually, a person spends at least thirty minutes exercising
everyday
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every day
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 which requires a lot of energy.
For example
, four years ago, I began running
everyday
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every day
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. I noticed I could not continue with
this
 as it was exhausting so I created excuses
which
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that
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 took up all of my
time
. Going to gyms is a big solution for
this
 issue. Gyms are known to have instructors who guide by developing plans that can help
people
 be motivated and
consumes
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consume
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 their
time less
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timeless
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.
For instance
, having a person around who prepares a strict schedule and is frequently encouraging
people
 can motivate
people
 to exercise often. To conclude, the lack of effort and
time
 are two reasons why
people
 do not exercise.
This
 can be Solved by going to the gyms where trainers can draw out plans which could encourage and reduce their
time
.
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