it is believed that children from countries with high level of unemployment should be offered only primary education and should noy be offered secondary education as it unlikely that they will get a job in the future anyway. do you agree or disagree?
Due to
the high unemployment
rate in some nations, a significant number of people out there hold the perception that youngsters should only have early education
because tertiary institutions will be a waste of time since getting a job in future might be challenging. This
essay shall vehemently debunk this
phenomenon and will further
bring to bear the reasons for the occurrence in the following paragraphs after which a logical conclusion will be drawn.
To begin
with, there are a myriad of reasons why teenagers should have access to secondary education
however
, one which is worth mentioning is that higher school not only prepare one to secure a career but also
improve communication skills. To explicate this
scenario, because of global change, communication has become crucial as a result
if people are not given the chance to pursue higher education
, conversion with individuals will become difficult. Although
folk might not be employed due to
the level of unemployment
, having control of languages and expressing oneself during conversations might create job opportunities. For instance
, the Ministry of Education
in Ghana conducted a survey and figured out that a nation with youth having command of communication ends up getting jobs in other countries.
Besides
being able to possess a great command of conversations, students need to have tertiary education
in other to advance higher education
abroad. To explicate, some countries demand a secondary school certificate before giving admission. For example
, my sister provided a secondary education
certificate before she was given admission. She would have been denied if she did not have such
a document.
In conclusion, after analyzing this
development, I totally agree that students need to pursue higher education
despite unemployment
high unemployment
rate. In view of this
, I opine that governments of various nations should construct higher schools for their citizens.Submitted by mboadi211 on
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