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Too many old buildings are in danger and demolished in many conutries. what are the main reasons? how can they be protected?

#buildings #danger #conutries
Ancient
buildings
 reflect the rich heritage of a particular country
However
, nowadays these are being crumbled to meet the demands of
urbanished
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urbanised
 society.
This
 essay shall discuss the causes behind their removal along with viable solutions. The various reasons leading to
demolition
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 of old
buildings
 are as follows
Firstly
, these
buildings
 are removed to meet the needs of
growing
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a growing
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 population. Sky-scrappers are part
if
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of
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urbanised
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an urbanised
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societyand
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society and
 they are needed as land is becoming scarce. Some of these old
buildings
 which are neither easy to live in nor are attractive to tourists can be removed considering the increasing demand
of
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 land by
growing
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the growing
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 population.
Secondly
, some historical
buildings
 are eyesore since these are prone to damage that can be caused by natural
disaster
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hence
 creating
threat
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a threat
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 to
general
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the general
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 public.
Therefore
, bulldozing these
buildings
 is a way to ensure
safety
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the safety
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 of people who live
next
 to these
buildings
.
Lastly
, lack of sufficient funds is
also
 the reason on account of which its become difficult to arrange proper maintenance
consequently
 they lose their
eye pleasing
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 value. The major steps that can be taken to preserve these
buildings
 are as follows The Government should plan and allocate
sufficient
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a sufficient
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 amount of funds for their
maintenace
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maintenance
 in
budget
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the budget
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 itself. To add, revenue generated from tax collection should
also
 be used appropriately. The general public should
also
 take the onus of keeping these
buildings
 clean by not throwing garbage and carving their names on walls
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 As a consequence, if these
buildings
 are renovated
then
 these can be preserved. To conclude,
removal
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the removal
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 of these
buildings
 due to lack of funds and their improper maintenance can be avoided with the support of
government
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the government
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 and
general
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the general
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 public.
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