Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history.some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skill that can help students find a job. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is certainly true that the conventional curriculum

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an important part of every

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.

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,some people believe that the vocational

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in

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the historical

subjects

.Indeed, I strongly agree

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reasons.The

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vocational training at

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age of schooling accelerates the interest of

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career

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, computer classes from the primary level of

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inculcate the interest of

students

toward computer and later it

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them to become computer professionals.

Moreover

,these vocational training deviates the hesitation of candidate about their aforementioned

job

in the down run and help them to build a satisfying profession in their life.

Thus

job

-oriented

subjects

create a better platform for the

children

than the traditional

subjects

Another reason is that the vocational subject in

schools

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the unemployment ratio in a country. Clearly, the

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aim of a student is to get

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immediately after schooling. When

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students

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about

the technical subject it

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immense

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opportunities

for the

students

to choose a better

career

.

Consequently

, every

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would be employed and

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unemployment

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sector will reduce.A recent study conducted by Oxford University in London,

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that about 80%

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in technical

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after schooling than the

students

in traditional .

Therefore

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skills at early school age give good oriented

career

for the

students

in their life

However

,some people think that conventional curriculum

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traditional knowledge about the country and

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children

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become more knowledgable about the cultural diversities in various countries.

Nevertheless

,it

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do not

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provide any benefits for the development of

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career

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for the

children

.So their argument is neither tenable nor robstus. To conclude, I reiterate the fact that the

schools

should focus on

job

oriented

subjects

which provide a good vision for the

children

about their future

career

as well as good professionals for the country.I hope in future

schools

would take the immediate measures to focus on vocational

subjects

.