Large companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, different organizations create awareness of their
products
using various means. One of the ways they do
this
is by leveraging on
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events
.
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some argue that it has a negative effect, I strongly disagree because these companies sponsor and promote
such
sport
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programs. Most
sport
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events
require a great
amount
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of finances allocated
to
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in order for them to be successful. It is no doubt that more than 50% are sponsored by big organizations. Even though
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multinational corporations use
this
in turn to promote their
products
, in my
opinion
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it is of mutual benefit to the organizers of these
events
.
For instance
, DSTV is known as one of the biggest sponsors of the world
fifa
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FIFA
games and are now
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contribute about 1 billion dollars each year. The more big companies use sports
events
for adverts, the more finances generated.
Furthermore
, these cooperations help to create awareness of the
events
sport
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events
in return. They create a viewers platform and promote different types of sports on their
products
, so when people purchase their goods or see them in stores,
them
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become unconsciously aware of them. Some even go as far as making souvenirs in the shapes of the sports.
For example
,
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last
World Cup,
Coca-cola
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company used stickers with the inscription FIFA 2020 on their soda bottles
instead
of the conventional ones. The more people saw or used these
products
, the more conscious they became of the
sport
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activities. To conclude, using
sport
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events
as an opportunity to promote
products
by big institutions is more beneficial as they finance these programs as well as promote them. Without their
supports
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they most likely would not be as successful as we see today.
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