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Some people belive that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinión

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In the world there are many things that
people
 want to
change
 but there are
also
others
 that we cannot
change
, it is very difficult to
change
 them because of how other
people
 see them, because while some of us agree, there are
others
 that may disagree, but I think that our future is not changed by someone else but by ourselves making all those changes that we want for our lives as
this
 can help us improve our future and our lifestyle, I think that we can
change
 our future by striving and showing
others
 that we can go very far without depending on anyone, it is important to look at our social circle if we want to
change
 our lifestyle because many
people
 will see you who support you and
others
 who will be envious that you progress, we in
this
 live have
that is
 very pending of that
people
 wants to get closer to us Because
people
 normally want to approach us to take advantage of our capacities for their benefit and it is very complex to advance emotionally and economically if other
people
 only want to advance alone and do not expect other
people
 to advance. We in
this
 life cannot think of just moving forward and wanting to be better than
others
 because so some
people
 die with more money and
others
 with less, fate is the same and
that is
 why we have to
change
 our envy and rage that sometimes gives
people
 to see
others
 progress, so we must be kind to everyone and enjoy everything that life gives us.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • acceptance
  • contentment
  • resilience
  • complacency
  • personal growth
  • societal progress
  • motivating
  • circumstances
  • growth mindset
  • innovation
  • persistent
  • frustration
  • dissatisfaction
  • realistic expectations
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