Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The current trend of increased sales of common consumer

goods

signify the

influence

of advertising and not

neccessarily

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necessarily

the real requirements of the

society

in which the

goods

are sold.In my opinion ,I agree with the statement that the current increased sales are due to the

influence

of advertising. The

influenceof

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influence of

technology has increased the sale of common

goods

.

This

is due to increased internet

connectivitity

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connectivity

which has a dime of

dozen

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effect

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effects

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on the greater population today even to the remote villages in the

society

.

For instance

,the availability of

hand set

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handset

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smart phones

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smartphones

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which

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apply

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has

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made advertising easy to reach a good number of the population.Technology

therefore

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,has increased the large coverage of

the

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advertising.

Moreover

,

advertisment

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advertisement

tend to paint a

one sided

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picture of

positive

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the positive

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side

of a good,

like

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the negative

side

effect of an

advertisment

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advertisement

will not be exposed

thus

influencing the consumers to consumers to consume a good without having a

second

thought of the

side

effects.

For example

,

side

effects of over the counter medicines are not

normaly

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normally

mentioned.

Therefore

,

advertisement

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advertisements

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not only

capture

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the attention but

also

influence

the consumer judgement on buying

the

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goods

that are not of importance to the needs. In conclusion,technology has increased the level of advertising

influence

for

goods

consumption increased rather than the needs of the

society

;

influence

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the influence

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of advertising the positive

side

has

also

lead to impulse consumption of

goods

instead

of the needs of the

society

.

Therefore

,advertisement has a greater impact

to

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the people allowing impulse

cosumption

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consumption

of

goods

rather than the

impotant

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important

needs