Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it’s unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

successfull

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successful

sports men

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sportsmen

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and

wemen

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women

take home

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great amount

money

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of money

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comparatively

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compared

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to other professionals.Some people support them for having much in their pockets whereas,other people think that they are taking much for the owners to realize.In my opinion,sporting professionals utilize the

talents

they have together with the skills which increase their ability to earn extra

coin

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coins

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.

Firstly

,sporting activities enable individuals to

to

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explore

the

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their

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talents

fully by

enganging

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engaging

in what

one

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they

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enjoy

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and can participate

without

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in without

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being

coarsed

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coarse

.The

talents

can be

indentified

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identified

when individuals are young and start enjoying having penny as early as they can;

further more

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furthermore

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,sporting activities promote both

economy

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economies

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any tourism which

are

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latter reflected in individual pockets of

sport

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sports

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men and

wemen

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women

.

For instance

, the extra coins they get from travelling and getting involved in

adversting

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advertising

activities.

Therefore

,

sport

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sports

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professionals are able to take home more comparatively.

On the other hand

,Some peo[ple think that sport

professinals

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professionals

are not fully baked in academics and are not entitle to earn more reason being they spend more time in the field doing practices.They are

also

involved in plenty of travelling trips.

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the much time they spend in practise sessions and field tracks.Owing to the facts, others find it hard to comprehend that

sports

pay. In summary,

sports

promote

tha

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the

local

talents

which are later converted to

increased

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an increased

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economy of a given country

thus

enabling

sports

professional

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professionals

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to earn more.Whereas,other people think that they are half baked in academics and not entitled to earn a penny.