Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In today's world, it is believed by some part of the population that capital
punishment
is crucial for a developed society. I disagree with
this
opinion and a given essay will discuss possible evidence and supportive facts.
First
of all,
to begin
with, the main reason why it is incorrect to implement capital
punishment
is since people cannot decide for God
such
things as
death
time.
This
is because of the fact that not only do not humans have
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power to cut someone
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else
else's
life but
also
everyone
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has
its
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own path and fate.
Therefore
, it can be concluded that
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capital
punishment
is a sin.
For example
,
church
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the church
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says that a murder of a human being,
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although
it can be considered to be fair, never can be implemented since we do not have
power
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to make
such
decisions.
Moreover
, another reason why it is not essential to have
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death
penalty is
because
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there is
such
a solution as
prison
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and a lifelong sentence.
This
is due to the fact that not only can
this
prevent a large number of crimes and violence but
also
it may rebuild
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of those committing crimes.
Hence
, there is no need
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death
penalties since other measures including prisons can be successful in securing our lives.
For instance
, recent research has shown that on average only 3% of prisoners are able to escape. Eventually, to conclude, I disagree with the fact that without capital
punishment
violence and the number of
crime
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criminal
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actions will rise since there are other possible approaches to solve
this
issue, namely
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long life imprisonment.
Furthermore
, people do not have a right to shorten
lives
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the lives
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of other human beings and so the
death
penalty should be prohibited.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deterrent effect
  • retribution
  • irreversibility
  • judicial error
  • human rights
  • ethical considerations
  • life imprisonment
  • perception of violence
  • rehabilitation
  • reforming
  • contentious
  • societal perception
  • morality
  • recidivism
  • capital punishment
  • justice system
  • incarceration
  • penology
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