Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In today's world, it is believed by some part of the population that capital

punishment

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is crucial for a developed society. I disagree with

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opinion and a given essay will discuss possible evidence and supportive facts.

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of all,

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with, the main reason why it is incorrect to implement capital

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is since people cannot decide for God

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things as

death

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time.

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is because of the fact that not only do not humans have

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the

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power to cut someone

elses

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else

else's

life but

also

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everyone

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has

its

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their

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own path and fate.

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, it can be concluded that

the

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apply

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capital

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is a sin.

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church

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the church

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says that a murder of a human being,

althouth

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although

it can be considered to be fair, never can be implemented since we do not have

power

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the power

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to make

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decisions.

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, another reason why it is not essential to have

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the

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death

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penalty is

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that

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there is

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a solution as

prison

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a prison

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and a lifelong sentence.

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is due to the fact that not only can

this

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prevent a large number of crimes and violence but

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it may rebuild

mindsets

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the mindsets

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of those committing crimes.

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, there is no need

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for

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death

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penalties since other measures including prisons can be successful in securing our lives.

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, recent research has shown that on average only 3% of prisoners are able to escape. Eventually, to conclude, I disagree with the fact that without capital

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violence and the number of

crime

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criminal

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actions will rise since there are other possible approaches to solve

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issue, namely

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apply

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long life imprisonment.

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, people do not have a right to shorten

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the lives

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of other human beings and so the

death

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penalty should be prohibited.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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290 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

deterrent effect
retribution
irreversibility
judicial error
human rights
ethical considerations
life imprisonment
perception of violence
rehabilitation
reforming
contentious
societal perception
morality
recidivism
capital punishment
justice system
incarceration
penology

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