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some people think that they can go to gym to remain fit,while other think that there are other better ways. discuss both the view along with your opinion.

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Healthy
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 mind can fit only into
healthy
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 body. To attain a good fitness level, there are many
options
 like going to gyms, doing meditation, yoga or joining some sports activity. Many
people
 are of the view that they can go to
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 to remain fit
on the other hand
 many
people
 think that there are other better ways to keep themselves healthy and fit.
Firstly
, going to
gym
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 has its own merits like
one
 can allocate fixed time from his/
hers
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 daily life to do many types of
excercises
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exercises
 which are helpful to keep our heart, bones and functioning of other parts of the body. In Gyms, music, trainers and other
people
 doing
excercises
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exercises
 motivates to do more and more. But it has its own major limitations like
one
 has to pay a huge amount as fee which is not possible for everyone and as the gyms are made in closed premises so
one
 can not get the fresh air.
On the other hand
 ,
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 are other
options
 which are better from
Gym
 from many aspects. Morning walks, running, cycling, doing yoga all these are free of cost and suitable for all age group
people
. In these
options
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one
 can have
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 atmosphere, get to meet many
people
 to talk and walk with. To conclude, considering all the points mentioned, I personally feel that the suitability of other
options
overweigh
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 the merits of going to
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.
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