Most artist earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree.

In today's world, it is believed by some part of the population that the government should pay subsidies to people whose work is related to art since they receive low wages. I disagree with

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opinion and a given essay will discuss possible evidence for

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of all,

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with, the main reason why

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is an incorrect approach is

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plenty of other places that the state should subsidise.

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is because of the

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that not only should the major focus be on educational institutions and hospitals but

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since the authority pays

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from its budget more people will be willing to become an

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artist

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,

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development seems to be irrelevant and unlogical.

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, if it was decided to pay artists the economic growth would probably slow down.

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, another important reason why

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is an unlogical way of solving the problem is that the

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that if a person is an artist does not make them different.

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is due to the

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that not only do people choose their profession in life but

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they are able to earn

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by selling their work or selling

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advertisements

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, workers whose profession is related to art are able to earn

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by various means but not just from their primary source of income.

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, a lot of painters who became famous promote different products and gain

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for

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. Eventually, to conclude, I disagree with the

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that the

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government

should provide artists with

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just because they receive low

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salaries

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, since it may lead to low economic growth and,

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, humans can easily find an alternative source of finance.