Most artist earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree.

In today's world, it is believed by some part of the population that the government should pay subsidies to people whose work is related to art since they receive low wages. I disagree with

this

opinion and a given essay will discuss possible evidence for

this

.

First

of all,

to begin

with, the main reason why

this

is an incorrect approach is

because

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plenty of other places that the state should subsidise.

This

is because of the

fact

that not only should the major focus be on educational institutions and hospitals but

also

since the authority pays

money

from its budget more people will be willing to become an

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artist

arrest

.

Therefore

,

this

development seems to be irrelevant and unlogical.

For example

, if it was decided to pay artists the economic growth would probably slow down.

Moreover

, another important reason why

this

is an unlogical way of solving the problem is that the

fact

that if a person is an artist does not make them different.

This

is due to the

fact

that not only do people choose their profession in life but

also

they are able to earn

money

by selling their work or selling

advirtisements

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advertisements

.

hence

, workers whose profession is related to art are able to earn

money

by various means but not just from their primary source of income.

For instance

, a lot of painters who became famous promote different products and gain

money

for

this

. Eventually, to conclude, I disagree with the

fact

that the

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government

should provide artists with

money

just because they receive low

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salaries

,

firstly

, since it may lead to low economic growth and,

secondly

, humans can easily find an alternative source of finance.