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With the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on environment? What can be done to solve the problem?

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The world nowadays is no comparison to the past. Due to globalization and the rise in ,digitalization there is a high increase in travellers for
flights
 all over the world. There is no iota of doubt that
this
 phenomenon adversely affects the
environment
.The following paragraph will analyse the problems of
this
 on the
environment
 and propose remedial measures. To commence with the reasons,
first
 and foremost increase in air and sound pollution.With the advancement in an aeroplane, use of new technology which is helping
flights
 for more comfortable and fast speed, emitting a high level of carbon dioxides and carbon monoxide in an
environment
 which not only damaging the
environment
 but
also
 impacting the ecosystem cycle.
Secondly
, All aeroplanes are dependent on natural resources, consumption of natural oils are
also
 rising.
For example
, from the research of several scientific universities, the data collected from
this
 study appears to support the assumption that the rise in flight is directly impacting air pollution as well as natural resources. In terms of solutions, I believe that
,
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 finding new and environmentally friendly ways to travel is a need of society now. The low and
medium range
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 of journeys
need
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 to be controlled by train
instead
 of
flights
. Governments need to play an important role in order to control the rise in
flights
 and make sure that only long-distance paths will get covered by
flights
.
In addition
, it is up to the person to make sure to choose the type of journey in order to help the
environment
 from damage. To conclude,
flights
 are an important part of travel for humans for long journeys, but with an increase in use it is damaging the ecosystem. With some precautions and ,care it can be reduced.
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