Some people think governments should spend money on faster means of public transport. However, others think money should be spent on other priorities (eg cost, environment). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In today's world, it is believed by some part of the population that the authority should spend
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budget on more rapid means of public
transport
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while others claim that there are other areas that require heavy investment.
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of all,
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with,
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the one hand, the government
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should
subsidise the
devlopment
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development
of public
transport
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in order to
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decrease
traffic
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.
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is because of the fact that not only is faster
transport
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more attractive for citizens but
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it is likely to eliminate bad
traffic
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and increase people's satisfaction.
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, the level of national happiness might get higher and the
country
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will experience the phaser of development.
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, recent research has shown that, in Ukraine, after the improvements in public
transport
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,
traffic
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has decreased by 20%.
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,
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, the state has to invest
into
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the construction of schools and hospitals in order to improve social factors.
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is due to the fact that not only will it lead to better education and healthcare but
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it is likely to increase the number of qualitative workers.
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, more workforce may
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increase
the
country
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's productive capacity and lead to economic growth.
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, after
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of better education in Belarus, the GDP of the
country
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has grown by 5%. Eventually, to conclude, on the one side money should be spent faster means of public
transport
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to eliminate
traffic
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, but, on the other side, it should be invested
other
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in other
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spheres
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as education and health care in order to improve
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capacity. In my opinion, the government need to spend the budget on public
transport
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.
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