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Many people want to have a successful career and a happy family life both. What problems are involved in combining a career and family life? How to overcome such problems?

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Everybody always wants to have a successful
career
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 and a happy family
life
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 both. There are lots of problems when they combine a
career
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 and family
life
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. When people have family, they have to balance
life
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 and
work
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. Nobody can do good both. The adult must do
work
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 well and hard to progress rapidly to have a good salary to get a good
life
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.
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, when they have family, they have to spend
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 taking care of the family
life
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 like children, External, internal, etc. If they want to have a successful
career
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, they will spend less
time
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 for family to concentrate on
work
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 and vice versa. When they choose
work
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 and cannot take
time
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 to look after the family
life
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, the family’s atmosphere and the feeling between family members will become cold and distant. When they choose family, they can progress slowly on
work
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 because they have to spend almost
time
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 for family
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, their children and solving lots of things in the family. Rarely that some people can balance family
life
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 and
career
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 but they can do it because they have many measures. Some who succeed in maintain successful
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 and happy family
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 give many pieces of advice.
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, the husband and the wife have to have the same mind. The elder said that When a husband and his wife were of the same mind, there’s nothing they could not achieve. Sharing the household chore is one of the best ideas that can help them to balance
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 and
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.
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, they need to use their
time
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 well. When they take advantage of their
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 at the office,
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 hard to get the job done quickly, they will save
time
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 working to take care of their family. When at home, after taking care of everything okay, they can spend
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 learning to improve their
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 skills. When they can do it, family
life
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 and
career
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 success will be sure to be balanced. In conclusion, I think that nothing is difficult if we have a good way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • work-life balance
  • prioritizing
  • burnout
  • strain
  • neglect
  • resentment
  • financial pressure
  • childcare
  • gender roles
  • societal expectations
  • flexible work arrangements
  • telecommuting
  • family-friendly policies
  • communication
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