Managing global environmental issue should be handled by one organization on a global scale. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your ideas
In recent years, environmental
issues
have grown tremendously. Some people feel that there should be a standard organization
to handle these issues
. In my opinion
having a global Add a comma
,opinion
organization
is not recommended as issues
keep changing from place to place and there cannot be common supervision to all these problems.
Firstly
, every country
has its own environmental issues
to deal with. For example
, in a country
like India, the main environmental issue will be pollution whereas in
the United States, the main issue they would deal with is radiation. So, having a common Add the comma(s)
,in
organization
cannot solve these problems independently. Every country
needs to have its own environmental hazard control programs which help to solve these issues
.
Secondly
, obtaining funds for the global organization
is crucial. When a global organization
comes into the picture, more developed countries contribute more to these organizations. For instance
, china funds maximum to WHO than any other country
. In such
cases there can be partiality developed towards such
countries and small nations will be overlooked even though the environmental impacts remain the same for all the countries.
To conclude, having a common organization
has more disadvantages than advantages. So, every country
needs to have its own institute to work against these environmental issues
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite