Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?
A school of thought claims that
computer
usage
on a regular basis can have detrimental effects rather than possessing merits. If questioned, I am in complete unison with the view. Light will be shed upon the reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
The reasons for using a computer
every single day are manifold. Firstly
, it increases screen time. This
result in continuous exposure of
harmful rays to the eyes causing eye problems and tension headaches. Change preposition
to
For instance
, many individuals have to wear glasses after a long term elevated screen time. Apart from this
, long time usage
reduces the functions of the brain. This
leads to decreased ability to focus, reduces the attention span and makes the person lazy.
Moreover
, high computer
usage
results in various health problems. Increased risk of diseases like obesity, varicose veins are seen. This
is because lack of movement in the body results in blood pooling towards the legs. Other postural issues like forwarding head posture may also
be a negative effect.
In a nutshell, it can be said that though there are many rewarding features of a computer
, overuse can be detrimental to physical as well as mental health. Therefore
, wise usage
should be encouraged.Submitted by PC on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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