Some people think that when recruiting, companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently while others considered they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,

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have been looking for potential

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that can contribute

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them. People have different views on whether

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should seek

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workers

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that are independent and innovative or those who

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more in

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and

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. In my opinion, I prefer those who are able to work as a team more than those working independently.

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often look for people who are creative and independent so that they will not have to spend too much time training them. Creative

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can certainly come up with

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ideas to give

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thoughts of their products or services, which helps

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save time to gather information from different resources.

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,

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who are independent are less likely to cause inconvenience for others.

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, independent

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will solve problems themselves

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of asking

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from colleagues. By figuring out the problems themselves can save time for the colleagues that might be busy themselves.

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with independence and innovation do contribute much

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the

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, I believe that

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who

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and obeying

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can do even better.

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is more efficient than doing work oneself.

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distributing work evenly,

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can accomplish their goals more easily with each other’s assistance.

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, working as a team can reduce stress since you don’t have to endure the whole pressure. Following instruction is

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important since every

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have their own

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. If every worker is not able to oblige to the instruction, the

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will be a mess.

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,

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are asked to hand in a report before ten at night, and most of them turned out to hand it in the

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day, which may cause delays on projects. In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that capable

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can contribute more to

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, my own view is that

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and following the

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are much more essential.